Leah walked over to the cliff’s edge and contemplated the approaching sunrise. Mark should have been in Africa by now instead of lying dead in their flat. ‘I will be the one to fly away’ she thought. Without wings, physics dictated otherwise.
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Dreams and Demons 
Brilliant.
BAM! Beautiful last line.
Makes me want to know what happened to put her in that place. I love the last line, too.
Perfect last line.
That was awesome!!!
That is a kick-ass piece of writing. Well done!
Oh, no. What a twist!
Fantastic! Loved the last line. You fit a whole story in here, which is so hard to do. Really great job. Thanks for linking it up!
Oh wow. Tragic! That last line with the clincher too. Very nice!
Oh my, so much in so little. Good job.
Oh. I thought I wanted backstory, but I suppose it doesn’t matter. Heartbreaking. And the clinical language at the end makes it more so!
I love the matter of fact line at the end. So powerful and filled with impact! Amazing response.
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powerful.
Gosh darn physics! Totally ruin everything. Well done!
Chilling in so many ways-loved it:”-)
great take! love all of the questions that linger:)
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